In a previous post, I mentioned the process that I use to edit my books. It’s occurred to me that I developed this process on my own, in a vacuum of sorts, and I have no idea how other independent authors edit their work. So what I’m going to do is outline my process below so we can compare. I am hoping other writers will have ideas that will help me improve my process!
1) Second draft. I usually try to write the first draft fairly quickly, with little to no editing, so I like to take a few days to celebrate finishing the book, and then I go right into the second draft. This edit consists of simply reading it and polishing it up. I usually don’t make any notes or go heavily into proofreading.
2) Beta readers. I try to get around four to six people of a somewhat diverse demographic to read the second draft. Usually, I give them about a week to a week and a half to finish the read, and I include a short questionnaire that calls out items I specially want to hear their opinions on.
3) Third draft. This is when I go through the comments from beta readers and make changes based on their questionnaire responses. There are usually enough revisions that I need at least two or three days for this step.
4) Consistency check/fact check. This is hands down the most annoying step in the editorial process. I have to pick over, in detail, everything every character says to make sure it doesn’t conflict with anything they said or did in a previous book or their personal timelines. (This is especially annoying in vampire books, where characters can be hundreds of years old.) At the same time, I also check everything that happens against sunrise/sunset calendars, which is another particular step you have to take with vampire books. Is it 6:00am and the vampires are out and about? Well, that’s fine if it’s February, but if it’s April, they will be burned to a crisp.
5) Proofread. This is the very last step, and I like to let a good few days go by between this and the previous step. I try to forget everything I’ve written, and simply proofread it very carefully. I usually have one other person doing this at the same time, in the hopes that we will both find different things.
And finally, I am done! Somewhere between steps 1 and 3 I also start cover concepting, looking for images, and talking to my graphic designer. And of course, if the book is in a series (like the one I am writing currently), I will be simultaneously plotting for the next book. And thus the endless cycle of writing turns once more!
Do you have a different editing process? I would love to hear from you!