Re-reading the Vampire in the City series

Last week I finished writing Fresh Blood, the sixth and final book in the VitC series. The next day, I left for a vacation to Cape Cod. We were with family, including our two children, who are almost five and just turned one. We stayed at a house on the beach, and spent most of our time outdoors doing stuff with the kids.
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My older son, buried in sand and screaming!

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Me with my younger son, not buried in sand but screaming nevertheless!

At nights, after the kids were asleep, I busied myself with re-reading the entire Vampire in the City series. I wanted to take notes on the timeline, figure out what loose ends might need to be tied up, and just have it really fresh in my head for the edit of Fresh Blood. Somehow, I managed to finish the fifth book the day after we came back, and am now set to start on the second draft. While I don’t have an official release date yet, I’m thinking sometime around October 1st.

While I was re-reading my writing, some of it from about ten years ago, I was mostly struck with how much my protagonist has changed over the course of the series. In the first book she was sometimes awkward to the point of embarrassing me as I was reading it. By the last book she is much more sure of herself and proactive, instead of just reacting to the situations I put her in. Overall, I am pleased with this progression, and I hope my readers will enjoy the culmination of a series that has been very fun to write!

On endings; or, not letting a vampire jump over a shark

Today my new book, Demon Blood, was released for Kindle. It is the fifth book in the Vampire in the City series, and since I started writing these novels, I knew it was going to be six books. Am I excited to write the last book in the series? Yes! In fact, I have already started writing it, and in this last book, will tie together most of the loose ends and settle most of the character arcs. Am I sad that this will be the last book from Emma’s perspective? Yes, it was fun to write a character so down-to-earth but funny, and at times even clueless. But everything has to end, lest it stagnate, and Emma and I are almost ready to part ways. Writing the last book is a tad bittersweet though, but I’m sure she’ll be able to get by on her own now.

On the flip side, I am very excited to begin an entire new series. I can’t stop myself from planning it out, thinking about the protagonist, and trying to pick out a name to suit her personality. That’s one of the great things about being a writer–there are always new stories to tell!

The process of my process (editing)

In a previous post, I mentioned the process that I use to edit my books. It’s occurred to me that I developed this process on my own, in a vacuum of sorts, and I have no idea how other independent authors edit their work. So what I’m going to do is outline my process below so we can compare. I am hoping other writers will have ideas that will help me improve my process!

1) Second draft. I usually try to write the first draft fairly quickly, with little to no editing, so I like to take a few days to celebrate finishing the book, and then I go right into the second draft. This edit consists of simply reading it and polishing it up. I usually don’t make any notes or go heavily into proofreading.

2) Beta readers. I try to get around four to six people of a somewhat diverse demographic to read the second draft. Usually, I give them about a week to a week and a half to finish the read, and I include a short questionnaire that calls out items I specially want to hear their opinions on.

3) Third draft. This is when I go through the comments from beta readers and make changes based on their questionnaire responses. There are usually enough revisions that I need at least two or three days for this step.

4) Consistency check/fact check. This is hands down the most annoying step in the editorial process. I have to pick over, in detail, everything every character says to make sure it doesn’t conflict with anything they said or did in a previous book or their personal timelines. (This is especially annoying in vampire books, where characters can be hundreds of years old.) At the same time, I also check everything that happens against sunrise/sunset calendars, which is another particular step you have to take with vampire books. Is it 6:00am and the vampires are out and about? Well, that’s fine if it’s February, but if it’s April, they will be burned to a crisp.

5) Proofread. This is the very last step, and I like to let a good few days go by between this and the previous step. I try to forget everything I’ve written, and simply proofread it very carefully. I usually have one other person doing this at the same time, in the hopes that we will both find different things.

And finally, I am done! Somewhere between steps 1 and 3 I also start cover concepting, looking for images, and talking to my graphic designer. And of course, if the book is in a series (like the one I am writing currently), I will be simultaneously plotting for the next book. And thus the endless cycle of writing turns once more!

Do you have a different editing process? I would love to hear from you!

The one in which I explain why I couldn’t write for nine months

Just over a year ago, I had one of the biggest shocks of my life when I found out I was pregnant for the second time. And in those early weeks, when the belly hasn’t grown yet and there is little to no physical manifestation of said pregnancy, I actually did not believe it. Then, about nine weeks in, the extreme tiredness set in, followed very quickly by the pregnancy brain.

For those who have never experienced pregnancy brain, this is how it goes: “I am pregnant! Holy crap! How did this happen? What’s going on? I need to sleep!” These thoughts are quickly followed by somewhat of a period of non-thought, in which you may fall asleep, or simply stare blankly into space. As soon as you come out of it, these thoughts occur:  “I am pregnant! Holy crap! How did this happen? What’s going on? I need to sleep!”

Repeat this for about seven more months. I’ve even woken up in the middle of the night to pee, tried to roll over and get out of bed, failed, and then thought “Why am I so fat?” before remembering I was many months pregnant. Basically, it was a nine-month period of having no short-term memory and barely functioning as a member of society.

I’m sure there are women to whom this doesn’t happen. Those women might be able to do awesome things like hold a coherent thought, leave a room without forgetting why they left in the first place, and believe that they are pregnant and are able to make plans for said baby or even buy a diaper before said baby is born. I am not one of those women. My brain only started functioning again about a day after the baby was born, and I then had the wherewithal to order diapers and formula online to be delivered before we got home.

Anyway, the point is that even though I was about 5,000 words into Demon Blood at the end of last year when I found out I was pregnant, my writing immediately dropped off. I was somehow able to get another 5,000 words done by April, which is when I became too pregnant to function. The baby was born on July 10th, and by the end of August, the thought occurred to me that I was in the middle of writing a book.

Fortunately for me, the baby had not been informed that newborns are supposed to be bad at sleeping, so I was able to pick up writing again more quickly than I anticipated. My maternity leave was over October 2nd, and through a shear force of will, I somehow managed to finish the first draft of Demon Blood at 5pm on October 1st.

Since I’ve started writing the Vampire in the City series, I’ve been able to get out one book a year, and I realized that the end of 2014 was rapidly approaching and the book wasn’t ready yet. So from the beginning of October until now, I’ve been working on the editing of Demon Blood almost without break. (I have several types of edits I go through, and usually give myself a few days off between them.)

In short, I have given up things like my lunch hour at work, sleep, and the playing of video games, but finally, with less than a month to spare, Demon Blood is coming out on December 5th! Here’s where you can reserve a copy!